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Tade Thompson

tadethompson

This week three people (the last one was a few minutes ago) sent me their stories/chapters for critique.It seems a good time for a thread about critique etiquette. Note the

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revvaIe

let's start with this tiny one since i just find it cute. kanata please don't k¡ll him ah yes. yes there you have itkaoru being weak to the Kanata Puppy

🚩Shepherd🏴

NeolithicSheep

My dude we all know what happened at Thermopylae. It is not a historical mystery. Xerxes stomped down the Greek forces, overran Boeotia, and then took Athens. Sorry if that

marina

cinnasroll

so unless they come back around with legitimate proof, i just wanted to let you guys know that @/acnhwitheve and @/livbbyxo seem to be the same person i really really

#BLM // Irate Chitterings: The Corben Experience

CorbenRaccoon

Around about today is the 5 year anniversary of the most head-spinning job interview I've ever had. Let me regale you, if I may.Started on a nice sunny day, driving

SEGASister 🌒🌕🌘

SEGASister

Simple Romance Writing Tips:1) You have two protagonists, not one. Both need focus and development. Both are agents of desire, not objects of it.2) Don’t end the story when your

J9G - J9 International House

J9Guardians

Nines rankings:Weishi 8 | QQ 9 | Doki 16 His Doki took a large hit after reveal of first ranks (likely due to ppl going to vote for

Witchdoctoralex

witchdctralex

Herbs mentioned in the Bible and popular spiritual uses ( a small thread ) Hyssop *cleansing+protection* Mentioned in Exodus 12:22 “Take a cluster of hyssop, dip it in

glossfix

theglossfix

Maximize our lip essential kit to its fullest! But how? Here's a guide! Step 1: Exfoliate your lips! Using our Clyde Scrub, take some of the product using your

Soori jaan

cakenobakery

DONT GET MARRIED BEFORE: a thread 1. Talk about DEBT 2. FULLY and WILLINGLY committing to one another. No "im not sure" and "what if's" and "its not the right

milk ☁️

milkstrology

leo moons ➫ the master thread Let's start with the CARFAX: What we know about Leo -- Leo is ruled by the sun. The energy to create and express the

Jill Promoli

jillpromoli

I was speaking with a teacher today about a common problem in schools every year that we need a solution for before September.What happens when a child is sick at

Tom | αβγολέμονο

EggLemonSoup

It's 4am so naturally I'm gonna write about pokemon difficulty and why the general consensus is severely misinformed and framed so badly that people are rarely having the "correct" conversation

Strass & Cérame

CerameStrass

Strass &Cerame vous presente sa collection de Lingerie Fine Senegalaise Feem Thread Le modèle DRACARYSCardigan en soie avec port jarretelle support en strass Disponible en vert émeraude, rouge, noirPrix:

olly

ollyrzysko

Retail isn’t dead. It’s improving. Bland generic stores in out of town centres are good for everyday product but it is in the local towns where life is finding a

Anthony Brian Logan (ABL) 🇺🇸

ANTHONYBLOGAN

Addressing ignorant people spreading lies about the HISTORIC BLEXIT rally (thread) Just because you got a flight and a hotel room does not mean you got paid as in, this